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Chủ Nhật, 29 tháng 11, 2009

Suoi Hanh Lake

Outline: Suoi Hanh Lake
• Introduction (Thesis statement):
- Honest to say, Suoi Hanh Lake is one of the most beautiful beauty-spot in my hometown with a lot of hidden charm inside.
• Body paragraph:
- Adjectives used in body paragraph:
alive, amazing, beautiful, bright, calm, colorful, creepy, crowded, deserted, different, dry, arid, enchanted, hot, incredible, interesting, magnificent, modern, mysterious, natural, noisy, perfect, pleasant, quiet, remarkable, shiny, silent, stormy, strange, terrific, ugly, unique, unusual, warm, wild, windy, tranquil, peaceful, traditional, tropical, harmonious, fresh, sensational, romantic, magical, fairytale, mystical, narrow, foggy
• Conclusion:
- Although there are many scenic spots in my hometown that attract me, I always proud of unknown beautiful Suoi Hanh Lake, my favorite place with a lot of hidden and unique charm inside.
My descriptive essay:
Suoi Hanh Lake
I had been to many scenic spots I my hometown when I was young boy such as: Hòn Lao - Monkey Island, Hòn Tằm Island, some famous beautiful beaches in Nha Trang, etc. They all seemed to be very attractive. I just thought that they all were the most spectacular, beautiful ones in my hometown and maybe in the world. But I changed my mind when I had a chance to travel with my family to visit my uncle Hong’s cabin that is nearby an unknown lake called “Suoi Hanh” which is five kilometers to the west of my house and near the Khanh Son tropical forest. I really surprised about Suoi Hanh’s unique charm when I officially put my first step viewing the beautiful spot on its high arid bank. Honest to say, Suoi Hanh Lake is one of the most beautiful beauty-spot in my hometown with a lot of hidden charm inside.

There was, I remember, still fairytale and romantic fog covered overall the circle of hills surrounded the big peaceful Suoi Hanh Lake’s surface in the early morning. So it’s hard for us to see anything in that situation, except for fresh, light and wet green grass with morning dew in the sidewalk which seemed to be waving to greet us in tranquil breeze. Actually, fog was one of the first difficulties for us to overcome that foggy day. Thus, my family and I had to walk along the narrow and creepy sidewalk to my uncle Hong’s cabin in the top of the hill to avoid fog and cold for a while. On the way going to my uncle’s cabin, we had to walk across the road went through a gap between long, mysterious and creepy bushes. Actually, I was surprised about some mystical and sensational wild plants which were naturally growing and covering the whole of the strange and unusual bushes. Some of them were shaped like alive translucent green snakes coiling themselves around the bushes, the others were in a weird shapes like aliens or monster, etc. I was completely interested in those remarkable wild plants as a result, so I continued going goggled deeply at magnificent wild plants for a while and I didn’t know that I got to the top of the hill. Finally, we could find uncle Hong’s cabin to avoid fog a while. Fortunately, A pale, watery and shiny sun shone through the crowded clouds and fog. Hence, fog was disappeared little by little; After that, we could see an amazing view that greeted us at the top at the top of the hill, a bright and colorful rainbow above my uncle Hong’s cabin began running to the other hills. At that time, the romantic and remarkable landscape admired me. Up to now, I still have a strange feeling of watching a such magical and terrific sightseeing.


Generally speaking, Although there are many scenic spots in my hometown that attract me, I always proud of unknown beautiful Suoi Hanh Lake, my favorite place with a lot of hidden and unique charm inside.

1 nhận xét:

  1. INTRODUCTION (2ms)
    - Background, hook 1
    - Thesis statement 1
    BODY (4ms)
    - Good ideas 1.5
    - Coherence, unity, development 1.5
    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1)
    CONCLUSION (2ms)
    - Summarize (1)
    - Lesson, suggestions (1)
    Total: 8

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